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by grugster

person sarah
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always! Loved the part where they all held her in their las. Until she calmed down- dunno why, I just liked the image.
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the possessive Fenrir it is so cute! But lucky girl she got so many to choose from....... LOL
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter....so much going on and getting ready for the next full moon...i'm so glad that she and Severus got some time together and glad she got to spend some other time with her mates...keep up the great writing and always remember this is your story and if others don't like it they shouldn't read it because there are others of us that really enjoy it and can't wait for updates!!!
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, those poor turned.
person Jnic
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I get soooo frustrated after readin a new chapter I just want to read the rest but i know I have to wait. I feel like a child on christmas eve.
person Betty
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update ASAP!!! Its sooo good
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I literally look for your updates every day :) i really liked this chapter but i suppose i was hoping for a little hermione/fenrir action, but i'm assuming that will be in the next chapter. i hope severus will be alright and stop fighting his wolf! as always, i love this story and i love the direction you're taking it in.

much love for you and your story!!!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I thought Neville & Hermione were never gonna go at it! But Ive been proven wrong! I cant wait to see who are the new subs though!!! This is gonna be awesome!!!
person izadleen
schedule August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, congratulation for the great story....As a pup, Hermione is full of trouble within the clan. May i suggest the trouble outside the clan like the other clan know her existence and try to kidnap her or Neville and Draco?And Head Alpha Ages punish the clan with taking over the clan to make more powerful of the clan, whatever it is, waiting for the next chapter...

PS
I wonder if u can make a sex scene using chocolate because my cousin just back from Russian and give me a chocolate and make me remind of Igor, well good luck..