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by grugster

schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!!! Im gonna go read the complete story all over again!!!!
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! As always, I love this story! Great new chapter! Poor Hermione and Draco (and Neville too, I guess) having to have that stuff put in them, but I guess they will appreciate it later! Can't wait to see what happens during the full moon!
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Sexy as always but very very touchy....... Please let Castor live..... And please update soon....

schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What makes an alpha decide to sell a sub, wouldn't that give a sub, who would already have major emotional issues, even more miserable? What happens if a sub has a very dom nature but like mio, keeps a lot of their human mind? would it just be beaten out of them until they were broken as it seems a lot of doms don't really care about the sub as long as they get what they want. Also, what's the general number of a pack?
those poor kids, sucks to be them.
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter...i felt Severus was a bit harsh on her when she hadn't done anything to make him upset but I guess that is just his personality...if i had been Hermione i would have turned my head and not let him try to comfort me after he had been harsh for not really a good reason, but that is just my opionin...however it was a good chapter build up for the next changing and i'm glad that even if Castor doesn't survive she got to talk to him and he got to apologize...can't wait for another chapter, i surprise myself how much i get excited when I see this story has been updated...keep writing your way!!
person purpleann
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Darius! I love that he is there to explain things to her. The scene with Calan was super hot, and I loved Igor flirting with her that was cute. :) When will we get another threesome with Fenrir and Yorik???
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww this is such a sweet yet sad chapter it was really good! I can't wait to hear how the full moon goes with the new potion for the Dominants =)
person sbrande
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great lead up to the moon.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love Sonia :)
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh the toyroom was alot of fun! love fenrir! great chapter! full moon is getting close!
person Carly
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Im sad every time a chapter ends. Write more! Write faster! Sleep? No need! Food? All you need is energy drinks!