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by grugster

person betty
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As usual it was another totally awesome story!! Good work! I just wish you'd update more often. i die from excitement everyday to see if you've updates, but i should'nt be compalaining. Quick question: do you plan on getting hermione pregnant towards the later chapters?

thankx
xoxxx
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished both the first one and this one and am truely enjoying your story. While I will admit some things, er, involving the heat ;) squick me just a bit, lol, it doesn't take away from my enjoyment at all and makes sense to me why its there. You are doing a really good job at combining human emotions and circumstances with the dynamics of a wolf pack. I can't wait for your next update. I think Draco is my favorite and if I recall him and Fenrir were up next. ;)

Incidently, I actually avoided this fic for a long time because of Fenrir Greyback. I couldn't get past his canon characterization at first to read your story: I was afraid it was some kind of torture/rape fic. I am so glad I decided to read it! I will be more open now to other stories with this character from now on, now that I know he can be written as a erm, 'good' guy (relatively speaking)
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love fenrir! hermione is really starting to be one with her.eolf! loved it!
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, short one this time. I feel for darius... it can't be fun watching those four die. Still at least Mio has a bit easier time of it this time out.
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now that was an AWESOME chapter....just the right amount of dominance but at the same time they listened to here and explained some things to her about the what needed to happen and why....so excited to see another chapter up today...glad everything went well for the changing for the main characters....
person A
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep on writing.
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really good! I hope Fenrir doesn't let the others mate with Hermione... It just seems wrong somehow....

Again, this was an awesome chapter!
person Betty
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a good chapter!!! Especially towards the end with hermione and fenrir, it was so romantic.
Can you please write more on fenrir and hermiones relationship?

Loved every minute, good work
Xoxxxx

person Anon
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY more awesomness! I love this story and i swear it just gets better and better, i can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ch34, herm is so caring.