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man, the wolf transformation really messes them over huh. so, Sev is another human minded wolf... some how that doesn't surprise me. As skilled with the mind arts and disciplined as he was it's no surprise that it would carry over... he must have a rough time with his instincts though.
Shaman huh? That sounds troubling. I wonder if Mio will ever be mental. We;ll see.

Every time you update this story make my heart so happy.... Yes I enjoy the intricate and mysterious lines that you masterfully entertained. But one plea... Two more mates. Castor and Roland. LOL I know but they are sweet in their own way.... Well the beauty is in the eye of the beholder..... LOL

loved the update! but im very curious as to what you have planned with severus. :) can't wait for an update!

Awesome awesome story. Please dont stop posting this fic. :D

Oh wow. I am pleasantly shocked at how much I enjoyed this story! Normally I don't read anything like this, as it's usually not well written, but gracious was this good. I couldn't stop reading from the moment I clicked out of sheer curiosity. Of course, I'm really confused about a lot, since I started with the sequel, but that just means I have even more to read. The entire universe you have created is so exciting to me. Its like a hybrid between a fairy tale and a bodice ripper. I just cannot wait for this story to be updated. In the mean time, I better start from the beginning...

I hope Sev realises his feelings soon! Neville needs some Snape loving! Haha, I think Hermione and Fenrir are cute together. Is it weird that I hope Draco and Tara find someone who loves them as much as Snape and Fenrir seems to love Nev and Hermione? I hope they do, they need some one on one loving too! Haha I just feel slightly sad that they don't seem to have one? Even if they are subs heh. I would still read tho cause I love this fic so much! Pls update soon~!

Awesome chapter i can't wait to see what happens with Nevile and how Toric deals with his situation!!

omg, okay this chapter has a million questions running through my head!! i want to know who they're selling, why they're selling him/her, and i really hate that they don't want hermione to know. sometimes i get really frustrated on her behalf for the things they do to her. in my opinion, being a sub shouldn't mean that you matter less than a dom, just that you choose to be submissive to them. as a member of the pack i feel like she has every right to retain full control of her body and her memory. it just doesn't seem fair to do some of the things they do to her.
but other than that :) i absolutely adore this story. update as soon as you can!

That was lovely! Any pairing you do is ok. Could you make Roland one of her mates as accident or the one who almost attacked her.... I know I know. too many choices but all them lovely........ Just please keep them coming. I am hungry for more........ LOL

ty for getting back to me. No,, no websites but several e mails. I'm happy to give you one of mine (or did i do that already... need to check) my Q's have nothing to do with your story but rather several scenarios of my own based on your world. Though, I admit, i did wonder what would cause a sub to be sold cause if they were there as just sex toys... that isn't much a life and being sold would hurt their self esteem more. I understand it a bit better now. Ages clan can afford to er share the wealth cause voldi is giving them a constant influx. Do they get passed on immediately or does the alpha wait a bit, see if they're compatible an if not, then pass them on?

Right, enough of my own Q's, on to the actual chappie. Whoa, did they just block some of Mio's memory? And Nev, surely they can't think of selling Nev. Sev would indeed lose it hard core and i think Nev would withdraw completely if they did. He's got bugger all confidence as it is. maybe Sev is bonding with Nev as a mate rather than just a sub...
Toric, ah that poor kid. Being one of Mio's mates has really put him in a spot an she didn't even mean to.
I wonder why they've got Mio on antidepressant potions... I thought she was starting to adjust so if they've got her on antidepressants that's kinda ominous.
looking forward to the next up date.