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November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was interesting but there is no plot.
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello AgainandAgain !
I'm a bit new to this website, and your story is one of the first ones I've read, and I have to say, it's AMAZING !
You really invented a whole new universe, and I think you are really consistent in your writting !
I hope you are still updating it regularly, but I don't really know how I can be made aware of a new update...
Anyway, keep it up !(please :) )
I'm a bit new to this website, and your story is one of the first ones I've read, and I have to say, it's AMAZING !
You really invented a whole new universe, and I think you are really consistent in your writting !
I hope you are still updating it regularly, but I don't really know how I can be made aware of a new update...
Anyway, keep it up !(please :) )
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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I just found Just Submit and I love both parts! I can't wait to read more!
I am a permanent substitute teacher, and they call me a super-sub, so I giggle whenever you refer to Draco or Neville's Status! :)
Keep up the great work!
I am a permanent substitute teacher, and they call me a super-sub, so I giggle whenever you refer to Draco or Neville's Status! :)
Keep up the great work!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read a HP fanfic in a long time but I have to say I'm glad I do now. This is a very good one, you are very talented! The story, the characters (except one), all are good.
The only thing though I don't like is Hermione. I'm so annoyed by her that I would like to slap her so hard she wouldn't see straight for a month... Always whining or complaining about something...
Apart from that I can't really say how much I like this story.
The only thing though I don't like is Hermione. I'm so annoyed by her that I would like to slap her so hard she wouldn't see straight for a month... Always whining or complaining about something...
Apart from that I can't really say how much I like this story.
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I am so worried about Severus I hope he is okay!! Can't wait for the next chapter =)
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so many questions answered! love this story and how its wrote! keep up the amazing work!
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i dont usually review, since i never know what to say.....
but since you're afraid we are losing interest, i gotta tell you: dont be..
i get really excited every time you update, i devour every chapter you write, because i find them incredible. your writing is amazing.
as a personal opinion, i just wish hermione would show her strength a little more, i mean... i know she's a sub, but she's allowing everybody else to stomp over her, and i cant wait for the time she gets tired of being called "stupid" and reacts.... still, that's just my opinion, and i trust you as an author, so i'm just going to wait and see what happens.
but pleeeease keep writing!! im still reading and waiting for updates!!
but since you're afraid we are losing interest, i gotta tell you: dont be..
i get really excited every time you update, i devour every chapter you write, because i find them incredible. your writing is amazing.
as a personal opinion, i just wish hermione would show her strength a little more, i mean... i know she's a sub, but she's allowing everybody else to stomp over her, and i cant wait for the time she gets tired of being called "stupid" and reacts.... still, that's just my opinion, and i trust you as an author, so i'm just going to wait and see what happens.
but pleeeease keep writing!! im still reading and waiting for updates!!
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved It please update soon!!!
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October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing it.
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October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so happy to see a new chapter.
So, Severus remembers everything...that is an interesting development. I'm a bit apprehensive for poor Severus - the werewolf mindset seems to be a bit removed from the human way of thinking. Not bad necessarily, just different, which is kind of nice since the wolves are no longer human. I like the fact that their culture is a bit alien to ours. What are they going to do...try to make him forget what happened with a potion or obliviate or beat him into submission? Poor Sev, neither option sounds like much fun for him.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
So, Severus remembers everything...that is an interesting development. I'm a bit apprehensive for poor Severus - the werewolf mindset seems to be a bit removed from the human way of thinking. Not bad necessarily, just different, which is kind of nice since the wolves are no longer human. I like the fact that their culture is a bit alien to ours. What are they going to do...try to make him forget what happened with a potion or obliviate or beat him into submission? Poor Sev, neither option sounds like much fun for him.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.