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Hey,
I really love this story. So sad that you stoped working on it :( Would just love for you to continue! I so want to know whats up with hermiones sire and that knew woman...
Marisa

oh this is perfection right here
i finished both sets in 24 hours
its not easy to get me glued to my screen like that
so kudos to you for that
i look forward to seeing more

Just read this story again for the who knows how many times. I simply love it. You've created such a great story with awesome characters. Thank you!!

I just reread just submit and just submit 2 it is such a great story :) Great job on writing it. Can't wait to see what fun Fenrir and Draco has now that the punishment is over. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work :)

(Just FYI, I was formerly Mark's Pet) I had recently started to re-read your stories, because they are WONDERFUL. I was so excited that you had posted new chapters, I almost ran ahead to read the new ones. But I got myself under control *really hard for a submissive, like myself* and am glad that I waited. I like the chapter with Draco and Darius. I can't wait to see how that sub-plot plays out. I was shocked (pleasantly so) by the threesome and double vaginal penetration with the three subs. I was please that Hermione's mates realized that the injury was an accident and have not forbidden the three to play in the future. I can't wait for more chapters. And just FYI, I have no intention to stop reading this story. My only sadness is that you will not write anymore after this story is complete. So I am torn between wanting new chapters and not wanting the story to end. So, I will ask for what I always ask for...More, Please!!!!

Wonderful scene at the end of this chapter...

I like her spirit!

I guess that I have not read enough of the reviews or I am reading a different story, because I do not see where there is anything to criticize in the story that I am reading...and I have often found enough to criticize in other stories. [Old English teacher!] If some one does not like a story, why do they keep reading? I have never understood that. I am on Chapter 28-9, I find that I miss being able to tell where a reviewer is in a story...
I'm going back to the story...wasted enough time ranting about others...want to go back to the reading.

Liked this chapter, especially the Elders. They have all the characteristics of many of the olders that I have known,,,what am I saying, I am one now too! HE HE!
on to the next chapter!!!

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM hoping this is making to you, been on an internet service that has dumped several things...here's hoping...
what a chapter!