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by grugster

schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest I am addicted to this story.... LOL
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I missed this fic so much! Im so happy that I have no school for a while so now I dont have to force myself to stay up long enough to read this fic but not grasp it! Do in love with this fic!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've never been so into a story here, yours is so amazing please keep writting im dying to know what happens next :)
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just read ch 39. God, Lance is the Shaman. I'm sure of it! And was Yoric trying to protect her, because she was scared of meeting him, or was he afraid of Lance knowing how loose Hermione is, how she doesn't use their titles etc.?
Anyway, great work, I love reading this! Update as soon as possible!!!
person Rookseer
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Can't wait for more!!!!
Lance is the Shaman isnt he?
person nina
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Here comes the shaman :D
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I like Lance a lot. Yorik's response to him was very intriguing! I assume you'll reveal his true role in the next chapter. Also, it was great to see Amaris and Morgan again! I miss them. :) Keep up the excellent work and IGNORE people who are bitching about Hermione being out of character. HELLO this is an ALTERNATE UNIVERSE fan fiction about Hermione becoming a submissive WEREWOLF. How the *hell* could that be anything BUT different from the character JKR created? Your story is interesting and compelling and I can't wait to read more!!
person vera
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
although I really enjoy this story. this chapter just points out how much you have twisted hermione's character. sure some changes in character can be expected after a transformation to a werewolf but to this degree? I cant see any resemeblence at all to the character JK created, its as if she is any bland ditz in teh world...
person Lily
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please continue the story soooon. I cant wait. :D
person A
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chapter! The twists are really coming out now. . .when will poor Hermione figure out that the one she is so relaxed around is the shaman she was so worried about?? And why did Yorik have such a strange reaction? Can't wait to read more!!!!