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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fenrir is such a bloke, not knowing what to do when someone is upset!lol!
OMG! as much as i loved this chapter, i need more, what is he going to say, is she a dominant sub?! (Cant there even be one of those) so many strange sinario's going through my head! Loved it! Like an insite to hermiones mind, and a reminder of all the strange things she has got in trouble for!
again, i loved it!
Update soon, pretty please!!
OMG! as much as i loved this chapter, i need more, what is he going to say, is she a dominant sub?! (Cant there even be one of those) so many strange sinario's going through my head! Loved it! Like an insite to hermiones mind, and a reminder of all the strange things she has got in trouble for!
again, i loved it!
Update soon, pretty please!!
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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update sooner!!!!
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So funny! Good trick for the Shaman though! Still love love loving your story- all the different ways they act make for very entertaining reading!
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! can't wait for more :)
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to be mean about this, but I guess I do have a suggestion. The past couple of chapters have been kind of short. It seems like you stop in the middle of a scene, which makes it difficult to read since the chapters are posted so far apart. For example, Hermoine's tour with Lance could have been all in one chapter easily, and then ended with her anxiety about meeting the shaman. This would not only keep your readers interested, but also progress the story much faster.
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Christmas present of another chapter...it was great and she is finally making some small progress...love where this story is going....keep up the awesome writing and Merry Christmas
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HAH!!! Knew it was Lance! Can't wait for the next update. This one was WAY TOO SHORT!
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're such a tease, leaving us with this cliffie! More please, I want to hear what Lance has to say!!!!
Also it was nice seeing her with other submissives like Neil's mate (Clara?). I'd love to see more of that. I can't wait to read more!
Also it was nice seeing her with other submissives like Neil's mate (Clara?). I'd love to see more of that. I can't wait to read more!
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I have no idea where you're going with this but it looks good. Thanks for writing this story.
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December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just knew Lance would be the Shaman :D Can't wait for the next chapter!