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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

person colao
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the storyline and look forwrd to the upcoming enlightenment
person thestralhorse
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think i love you right now!!! thank you for updateing, it was my first day of semester today and I so needed a chapter of this story! and it was excellent, the look into hermiones mind was awesome and i can't wait for the meetings to start
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!! Literally reread the 1st Just Submit and then this one. Got so much more out of reading it the second time threw. Keep up the good work! :D
person Sincerely
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I also wanted to add, other than desperately wishing that more chapters are available (my fault for being so impatient), that I would really like to see a couple more Roland/Hermione scenes, and also some Yorik/Fenir ones. Your stories are really good! Thanks for keeping me entertained so fully!!!
person Sincerely
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved Just submit and Just Submit 2!!! I REALLY hope that you either update or post another sequel on this site very soon, because I am entranced in this story!
person A
schedule December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait to read more! Keep 'em coming : D
person mickeyminion
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more! I started reading the story not long ago and was able to read most of it straight through without waiting. Now the time between updates seems torturous! I love the direction the story is going in, especially having more plot/character development.
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel a bit sad that she wants to get rid of the memories of her human life, but if it's to keep her healthy it can't be helped. she's not like Sev, she doesn't have his iron will or control.
Still, you'd've thought they'd figure by now that keeping her out of the loop will only make her stress and/or work herself into a panic. she's still so very unsure about herself. they keep telling her to be and act more confident but then doing things that stress her and erode that confidence.
I hope Lance can help Nev too. He's even worse, confidence wise, than Mio.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hermione in this story is very stupid and annoying
person Michelle
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still my favorite! I'm in the camp of those who knew Lance & the Shaman were one & the same. The cliff hanger was down right frustrating. I'm so ready to hear what he has to say. It would truly be a gift if we had another update before the Holidays