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Absolutely love your story! I check the site every day to see if you updated. Is there a way for me to get an email if your do?

I think this is a fantastic, well written story. The characters are well developed and your world is very detailed, without being too far outside the realm of possibility given a magical world with 'mythical ' creatures. I greatly enjoy the detail in your storytelling's, for both the intimate physical scenes, and the more political or plot scenes. I can't wait to read the next chapters, and I hope you continue writing. You do a fantastic job for not having English as you native language, and the final product you and your beta turn out is captivating and thought-provoking.

very good, I can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work.

Hi, I reviewed earlier. And I was wondering if you were done with this story, or planning to continue writting!
please email ma back at:
scott.229@wright.edu
when you have the time!!
I love every chapter and this is my third read through, also three of my friends are now reading as well!

Hello, I stumbled upon this story, honestly thinking it wouldn't be worth a read. But as soon as my eyes read through the first paragraph I knew I had found a gem worth keeping. In a short amount of time, you had me pinning for Ages, crying for Draco, and screaming at Hermione. I fee in love with the words, the structure, and the rich dialogue that had been produced in such an astonishing way it led me to tell all my friends about this wonderful find. However, sadly as I began to read I saw that the story was not complete, and that there seemed to be a stop. I hoped to send you this review in hope that you may have completed this amazing tale. That I think is extremely novel worthy. I hope to Merlin that you have or at least plan too and that you still have these wonderful characters trapped in your mind just waiting to be let loose again. If you receive this review and respond back, I will be greatly humbled and dare I say feel as if I am talking to a creative saint. Thank you for writing a tale so rich in detail and with the power to move my heart.

-your devoted fan
Shirlisa

Awesome new chapter! Really love the 'counseling' session and the Shaman! Still totally loving this story! Can't wait to read more!

Firstly, happy new year! secondly, what a chapter!! loving this lance guy and the safe "can of worms" he is opening here!! Enjoyed every second of it, cant wait for more!!

interesting, i suppose that makes sense though. it wouldn't be in a subs nature to deliberately cause problems... just how is a pup different to sub and what is it that makes her one. I don't think mio is deliberately causing problems, she just trying to muddle through an increadbily confusing situation. It's sad that all her acquired knowledge appears to need to be dumped. Will she have to re learn it... will she have a chance to re learn it? What exactly is her role appart from, erm, stress relief for the doms.
I hope the shaman can help, cause it still seems a bit mirky.
do all clans have equil access to the shaman or do they need to book him?

I've decided I like Lance....:) I wasn't sure what I'd think of the Shaman, though I did guess that Lance was the Shaman before when Hermione was showing him around, this chapter made me like him more. It was definantly a surprise that the Shaman wasn't a werewolf, but a good one. It's probably better to have someone outside of not only the clan, but the species I guess, as the one to help solve thier problems. Then he's truely unbias. And from the sound of it, he's been helping the wolves for a very long time. I get so excited when I see a new chapter up, I can't wait for the next one and getting to see how Lance helps Hermuione, and what all the "problems" are. Great story!

That was a great start for this new year! TY for the update I hope to see another soon.... I am addicted to this story...