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oh, what delightful insight

I love this story and it is one of my most favorites and i am willing to wait as long as neccessary for you to write and get it back from your betas! also i am not going to care if it takes a long time i just hope that you never let anyone else direct you from your planned story or let you get discouraged! i will be watching for more of the story when ever you can post. just know that i love the story and i do hope that you have lots planned and you may one day feel inclined to do more stories for you are a great writter!!! :)

I hope that you are not having problems as I did with my fic with the uploading chapters or correcting one.... THe new profile is very modern but I admit very confusing. What I did was, in my profile locate Harry Potter category in the left hand side, click and in the next window when you go to the pull down meny appeared my story list, from there was just add the new chapter and save. Crazy, I know but I think the Adm did it for security.

I hope that the next update of the systes is an alert one for stories updates...

Blessigs, hope you can update soon.

angeles

Love your story and how you portray the werewolves, it's become my fav story on here! I'm still waiting for hermione to snap about Harry and Ron and finally grieve if thats where your planning on going of course. Thank you for taking the time to write this :) please update soon.

I disagree with the others. I love Hermoine. Tara does act like she is supposed to. I get how Severus can be divided between Nevile and Hermione. Nevile is supposed to be there to please everyone and can not just have one mate. Unless he is just an extremely weak dom. Hermione is supposed to think for herself. Is that not what pups do? She is supposed to have more power than the other subs. Yet, I feel that she is still trying to find her nitche in everything. While, Nevile is just more go with the flow and is slowly adapting to everything going on. Maybe if Hermione would relax a little bit more and spent some more time with her *Fenir(pack)*. It would also be cool if we could see one of the subs get pregnant and the process that goes on with that. That could be an interesting twist. Way to go with the story though! I love it to bits and pieces. I literally read both parts completely the other day! :) Keep the great work up.

-P.S. I hope you didn't mind my suggestions. I meant no offense at all.

First I would like to say that I think you're a very talented writer and I like this story. But I think your Hermione is a very selfish person... I understand the whole concept of the different thinking of dominants and submissives, but all I see is that Hermione always thinking about herself. If we talk about a community like the werewolfes that you described, the best thing would be really just to sell her off. You see, Hermione is always complaining, she didn't try to say the others of her problems, she just demand for everyone to understand HER. They always saying her to stop thinking, but she doesn't really doing that. I mean the thinking. She doesn't use her brain, it seems her only goal is to make every strong dominant her mate so she could influence them to her liking. She thinks that everything has to be about her, she doeasn't understand how a community works... She should just accept her role as a submissive.

The other thing I don't understand is the Severus/Neville relationship... Severus is so sure about his like/love for Neville but still his first concern is always Hermione. I know, they are mates, but WTF, she has already five others to lick her ass or protect her or whatever... Neville shouldn't be just a bitch for Severus too.

I really hope that Hermione wouldn't make Igor, Roland and whoever is strong enough her mate too, it just shouldn't be right, she already can't think of her mates like she should. Her only concern is always herself and it's not right. She is a coward always demanding that everything happens the way she would like it but when someone shows her her place she is all like 'I'm sorry, I'm sorry'.

You described Tara as someone who's only concern is to get laid, but to tell the truth she is the only one true to herself in this whole bunch. I like her very much.

I like your story very much nevertheless of my strong dislike of Hermione (she is really a bitch). My native language is not english but I hope my comment isn't too incomprehensible. I would be really interested in the everyday life of the other subs, I hope you will write more about them.

And how can Fenrir call Neville or Tara a bitch? Didn't you wrote it was a taboo to call them that?
I would really like to yell in his face (and some other dominants too) that the only bitch right now is his mate...

I love your story so much. Thank you for writing it. Also thanks to your beta. Have I told you lately that I love your other stories? Well, I do.

YAY for an update!!! Definitely starting to like Lance! Curious as to whether or not Hermione can answer Lances question about what she knows about Fenrir.... Doesnt seem like they ever talked much to each other

I enjoyed that you posted, but I also feel the level of description in this chapter was not as round about as usual, and the character flow of each individual seemed off. For me it felt like Hermione and Draco would have taken a bit more egging on to couple like that. All I can say is I'd like to see the character flow from the other chapters again, and that each chapter remain consistent to each other.