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for Just Submit 2

by grugster

person Anon
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I just read the whole thing again and I can't wait for more.
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story!!!!! PLEASE update ASAP! i know that you must be busy but i miss reading this story
person Nette
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've just found this story plus the original. I've really enjoyed it and look forward to any future updates!!!
person Pauliina
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please finish this story!! It's realy good and I want to see how it ends.
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, it's been so long since I've read this, wonderful to come back! I love this story and what you've done with Lance in these last few chapters is really interesting. Looking forward to see how he resolves Hermione's issues! And also hopefully some sexy fun times for her and her alpha... ;)
person Velvet black
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so addictive! I literally haven't been able to stop reading since I started with Just Submit 1. The change in Fenrir is simply astonishing and the whole wolf hierarchy is so intriguing. At first I thought it was a simple dominant and submissive hierarchy with different levels but it's so much more than that. I love the world you have created, and all within one house too! The sex between Hermione and Draco is so adorable while Yorik and Fenrir are so intense. The new twist with the Shaman really keeps the story going too. However, what I'd really like to see is a proper bonding between Hermione and Roland. Not just a one time sex thing. He must be so jealous his beta was chosen over him and I can't help but feel sorry for him when he wants Hermione so much. Maybe he can do a grand gesture like throw over Tara for Hermione - that would be fantastic!
person C
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just reread 'Just Submit' and 'Just Submit 2' and loved it just as much the second time around. I am sad you aren't really updating anymore! PLease consider a couple more chapters!
person A
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!! Hope to see an update soon!!!
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update this soon! It feels like it's been forever! I wanna see what happens that the next meeting with the shaman.
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! Love this!