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April 3, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Hola! encontre esta historia y quede enganchando. Gracias! Hasta la próxima actualización. 😉
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May 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More please? Excellent story very well written and super hot
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April 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you've not abandoned this story. Ive really enjoyed reading it and have reread it when you've added new chapters. Please update it.
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March 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
More please?
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March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story, just submit 2, and I was just wondering when the next chapter is gonna come out? I really love the story and if you need someone new to help you edit before you post your stories online, I would love o be your "beta", so please keep writing just submit 2.
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October 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story! !, I hope you can update soon!!,
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August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think Fenrir was far too lenient with Draco for tearing Hermione. She did tell Draco it was too much at least twice. I hope there's going to be something in the next chapter, if there is a next chapter, that makes sure Draco truly learns his much needed lesson. Fenrir's an idiot for letting Draco manipulate him.
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August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you end up coming back to this story. It's one of my favourites on here and I keep on coming back to read it over and over again. :)
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July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story to the point where I keep on reading it over and over again. I disagree with the other reviewers, your version of Hermione is great. It's a pity you appear to have stopped updating your story.
The one thing that I've noticed is that, no matter how many times I re-read this, I really dislike Tara to the point of constantly wishing that something will happen that will make her as unappealing as possible to all the dominants in the story. She's just so... annoying and she kinda disgusts me.
But she's important in the story because you really do need one character that you hate in any story otherwise it becomes boring so well done.
To end on a positive note, I will say that I do think that your story is really well written. And sorry for using 'I' so much in this review.
The one thing that I've noticed is that, no matter how many times I re-read this, I really dislike Tara to the point of constantly wishing that something will happen that will make her as unappealing as possible to all the dominants in the story. She's just so... annoying and she kinda disgusts me.
But she's important in the story because you really do need one character that you hate in any story otherwise it becomes boring so well done.
To end on a positive note, I will say that I do think that your story is really well written. And sorry for using 'I' so much in this review.
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July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well... In the end I think Tara is useful though as a friend to Hermione and as a source of information and the packs would be unbalanced if she was lost but there are large parts of Tara that I do dislike. For example, her arrogance and her possessiveness over Janto. Janto is one of Hermione's closest mates and Tara needs to be knocked down a few pegs. (this is a continuation of my first review now that I have thought about it more)