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Damn Wild Turkey! Makes you do things ... funny, funny things! Great stuff!

That's an interesting little tryst between the elder teacher and her young and compliant student. At least in the movies I've seen he never seemed to lose his hint of nervousness, and that seemed to fit perfectly. If his aunt liked to drink and "take liberties" with Harry then I can understand even more apprehension. Harry naively assuming it was a potion before he made the connection was also cute.

Skipping the obvious puns let the short scene keep a serious tone, though "Yes, thank you," gave me quite a chuckle. You described her drunken affect very effectively in the first few paragraphs, and the sex acts were detailed enough without taking the focus off of the whole story, McGonagall's seducing Harry, and it was also interesting that Harry noticed her age but was admiring how good she still looked (and felt) more and more. Then again, heightened sexual arousal could make the positives stand out more

Yet another interesting use of the word! I didn't even think of the liquor when considering what people would come up with! You did well portraying the scene within the short peice, enjoyable :D

Hahahahah, wow, I can't even begin to describe what I went through reading this. It was a strange roller-coaster of "LOL" and "ewwwww" and "why am I finding this hot?" and "ewwwwww" and "LOL" all over again. I honestly don't know how you manage to write this well, to go into such outrageous situations and come out grinning at the reader with a raised eyebrow. Definitely a standing ovation for you.