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for Fall into Madness

by ronsmistress

schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An ace bang job!
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! What has he done with Severus??? How will they get him back? What will happen to Dorian??? AAAARRRGGGHHH!!!! I can't wait for your next chapter! Great work!
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woot! That last line(ch.5) was what I was talking about last review! Way to step it up! I loved Severus's and Ron's date. It was the best description of the perfect date(well at least for me ^_^).
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is just as good as "Ron's Decision"! What is Dorian up to? How will Ron and Severus deal with him? I can't wait for the next update!!! Great job!
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, I like artist Ron. ^_^ The conversation with Snape is good too. I hope you elaborate more about the ex tho as he doesn't quite come off as the jealous possessive boyfriend that your aiming for...
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know I'm not really into slash but this is a great fic! You don't sexualise it and make it too porny like most slash fics are. Count me in as one of your regular readers I look forward to seeing what's going to happen!

Well done!
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just adore Severus soo far he's suave, mysterious, and just oh my gosh! Can I have him?!

Dorian...smh...

looking forward to mas! :)
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see Ron in this, the poor schmuck never gets any romance. Boo Dorian!! Can't wait for next chapter.
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far, but there seems to be a chunk missing from chapter three
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is nice. its cute. me want more :)