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for Fall into Madness

by ronsmistress

person Tiff
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story!! Good Job!!
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I could not stop reading, kept me up until 3:30am!
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story! It was well done, and I'll be watching for new (Ron/Severus) stories from you in the future. Oh, and as for the mother bit - I've seen that reaction before... and while anger can be a reaction to that kind of event, it's definitely not the only one. You did wonderfully with it! Great work!
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw what a lovely ending! I was a little surprised Dorian topped himself but suppose one does silly things when addled by madness.

Great fic and I hope you write a sequel or another smimilar work!

Well done!
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously SERIOUSLY digging this fic! I'm not a huge slash fan but you write it beautifully it's not over sexualised and focuses more on the relationship. And I'm digging the drama too! I hope that Dorian son of a bitch gets what's coming to him! And he will with Harry and Moody on his trail!

Well done and I look forward to reading more!
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!! Dorian has Ron! Oh, no! What will he do to him? How will the find them to save Ron? OMG! I can't wait for more! Great job!
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn it he go ron!
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
severus!
person Jan
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely love this story. I can't wait for chapter 13 to be posted, I need to find out whats going to happen to Severes. Hope nothing life threatening.

Please update soon ^_^

Jan
person Tesgura
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What's Dorian going to do to Severus? Whatever it is, he's got Harry, Ron and Hermione on his case and with kidnapping charges I'll bet he's going to be locked up for a long time.I hope Severus is going to be ok though, can't wait to read more.