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schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love the way you've made these two work together. hope to read more soon!
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice idea for a story but I'm kind of bothered with how there's practically no response from Hermione (orSnape) to the things they experience. The veneer is too thin. Doesn't Hermione's head hurt from letting people use her hair as a rope?

And I sure would be more curious in their shoos to see what'll happen if I deviate from the storyline.
person EvaBrick
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update - I love this story. You write beautiful descriptions, and you think of great little details to give the characters more depth. This is one of my favourite fics ever! :)
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Hermione. Now go on, let's get one where they have to spend some more time together. I think perhaps next you've got Jack and the Beanstalk. Clever, but I'm waiting for another princely rescue. Did we do Sleeping Beauty and Snow White yet? :-p Cannot wait to read more.
~CC
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please keep updating!!!
it's really cute
also, I like how you stick to the original stories not Disney's
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Quite the little story you have going here. At first I was sure that I wasn't going to enjoy this, and have actually skipped over it thrice on the stories page looking for other reading. But amidst the snow and winds today I sat down and found myself rather engrossed with it. Bravo for all of the lovely matches in these stories. Glad you got the brother sister story out of the way first. ;-) Now let's see...what have we still to encounter, Sleeping Beauty? And hrm...Beauty and the Beast? And dare I say Snow White? That's at least three...and obviously you're getting a start on Thumbellina here. What other ones are there? I do hope we get some more romantic action soon. You know in the original Rapunzel, he sleeps with her, knocks her up and that is how the witch knows a man has come to see her, because she no longer fits in her gown. ;-) But either way, most impressive stuff. Let's see another chapter, and soon, shall we?

Cheers,
~CryingCinderella
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mallow Cakes! This story is getting so good and so sweet! I just want to say your last chapter's title was very clever indeed! I didn't get it until a few days after I read it and I saw a goldfish cracker's commercial! XD like I said clever! I also want to say, I'm looking forward to the next chapter because I love the story of Thumbelina! Although I've not read it in a long long time.
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can not believe how much I actually enjoy this story. I usually hate Hermione stories, or any Het stories for that matter. But you have managed to successfully combine two of my favorite things!!! Harry Potter and fairy tales!!! I love the Disney versions of these stories and you have done wonderfully!!! I eagerly await your next update!

~nekluvshp
person EvaBrick
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeeeee! You updated! Thank you! What a great Christmas present. I'm alone for Christmas, and it's really nice to read the new chapter to keep my mind off it. :)
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story ^^ I really do hope you keep it up