rate_review Reviews

The story was lovely; well written with wonderful dialogue. My only real complaint is the very, very trite ending, but I'm sure that's not surprising since it's in the title of the chapter. Pregnancy used as a plot device is one of my biggest pet peeves in any kind of literature, but I guess it can be justified (but only a little 😁) in a story about fairytales. I would have preferred if Severus had decided to stay with Hermione because he'd accepted his feelings for her, not because of an unintentional consequence that forced his hand (even if he didn't mind). Trite ending or not, I do like his last line. It was sweet but not cloyingly so. In fact, it could be seen as charming wit or as mildly snarky humor. Oddly enough, I'm fine with either. Thank you for sharing!