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for Careful What You Wish For

by EternusCaries

person SParker
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #20...

You know, you're getting better and better as you
write this. :-)

..and Harry & Draco give me a toothache.
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
frist and for most this is not a flam. i love the story just find it a bit rushed. i like the development of the story but find the people of the dark annoying. that is just an persanal thing. i whant to kill them myself but i'd love to see what you have plan for them. i can't wait to read more just please slow down.
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
mmm bacon ;)
I love that Draco isn't a morning person lol


~Eros
person Tesgura
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor boys with their horrible hard-ons! I hope more snogging is in their future too Harry! Deff worth the wait, really looking forward to more!
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeee!!!!! Wonderful!!! I love seeing Draco so forward! It's awesome!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
leave it to draco to be blunt ><

~Eros
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... Please do update soon, this left me wanting more!!!!!!
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh very beautifully well written :D
person Tesgura
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL they are in for a surprise when they try to get in the same way Harry and Draco get in. Looking forward to that scene! Do they get transported to the Headmaster's office or does he just get alerted? Either way should prove hilarious, great chapter!
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh very beautifully done :D