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for The Collar And The Carrot

by dmdarklord

person Anonymous
schedule August 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

epic 

schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would definitely love to see a continuation. Especially one featuring all the positions.
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
depraved yet beliveable

you should do one where the tables have turned

and vernon is the slave.... turnabout is fairplay
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was terrible. In a complimentary sort of way. I do hope harry was older in it, 16 or 17.
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing yet brilliant!! When's the second chapter coming?
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nasty. Vernon I mean. You wrote this really well. I hated the whole thing, but that was mainly because it was described in a way that was believable. Thank you so much for writing this. Gives me another reason to hate Vernon. I'll never see a carrot in the same light again.
person Youka
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed it. The idea was interesting, and unique.
Hoping you'll write more, or write what happens when the man comes back for the collar.
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i read it i found it to be very cruel and mean and sick