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for An Odd Crush

by harrypegger

person mike
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Was not a fan of the first part of chapter 8, at all.
person Reyn
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
After several months of waiting we get this chapter. Did not like it at all.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know if someone raped my arse, no matter the reason why I think I would probably not say "oh it's alright I deserved it" I would probably if not kill then at least injure them severely. Yes I get that he was horrible to Pansy but I don't recall him raping her, at worst a reasonable retaliation would have been to beat him up either magically or physically either of which should have been at Pansy's discretion. There's nothing grown up about saying "oh someone just raped me, but that's fine because I was a douchebag to someone else" that's just stupid, I just find it unlikely he'd be satisfied with just pranking her or something in retaliation; not taking action against Pansy because she had nothing to do with it? Yes. But letting Daphne off with barely any vengeance? No.
person voljin2
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ugg - Good chapter

But I really hope Harry gets some revenge on Daphne, hopefully with Pansy there - If you could write it right it would be an awesome threesome.

Looking forward to next chapter and hope it won't take to long
person brazilanana
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
it's Harry/ Pansy, not Harry/Hermione.
Keep Going.
person brazilanana
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
it's Harry/ Pansy, not Harry/Hermione.I never thought I'd feel sorry for Pansy, but this proved me wrong. Very well written chapter and adds another layer to this story.
Please no Harem ,no threesome, no foursome.
And PLEASE NO HARMIONE, NO DRAMIONE.
Hermione needs a serious reality check. Someone needs to slap her in the face.
Keep Going.
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Having read your most recent posting, I decided to check out your other stories. I REALLY like this one. But then I am a real sucker for a Dominate, Aggressive, Rough Harry ;). I know, I'm a sick puppy, what can I say. I am requesting, begging, and pleading that you continue on with this story. More, please!!!!
person brazilanana
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Pansy / Harry.
Siempre que puedo leo algun Hansy, o algo con Pansy; es uno de mis personajes preferidos.
person brazilanana
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Pansy / Harry.
Siempre que puedo leo algun Hansy, o algo con Pansy; es uno de mis personajes preferidos.
Quiero que sepas que te apoyo y me gusta mucho, mucho, demasiado, como escribes.
person Bob
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jesus how you could you stop here!!?? This is probably one of the top 2-3 Harry/Pansy stories I've ever read! Keep going! Update! Moarrrrr!!!!