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for An Odd Crush

by harrypegger

person red demon
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update. I loved the chapter and I like the additional stuff in Ch.9. I loved Daphne's reaction, she liked it but not for an everyday thing. I think Harry and Pansy are really starting to like each other. I'm glad that Harry worked things out with Hermione and Harry admitted that he like to dominate his partner. I hope to see Harry and Pansy really explore that with each other and if another girl come along I would love to see them team up and dom her together. They made a great team against Daphne. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person brazilanana
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hits 41248 and only 26 reviews? Let me be part of the not-so-silent minority.
This is a well written psychodrama that has less to do with magic and more to do with humanity.
I love this fic. .Harry is one of my fav Harrys, and the HP/PP pairing is (in my mind) severly underrated and underrepresented at this site. I mean, the guy almost got sorted into Slytherin. Most of story Hermione is going to get Draco, then we can't leave either Harry or Pansy hanging, right?
oh yeah, the Great Hall will never be the same...hmm...are Pansy and Harry developing real feelings for each other?
Harry needs to confess up to his growing reliance and LOVE for Pansy.
Now Harry know difference between being dominant, and being an asshole.
I like that even though Harry and Pansy are having rough sex it seems almost like they're making love.
I loved the dynamic you have going between Harry and Pansy in ckichen , with Dobby too.
The thruth ,Hermione is self-sufficient, very smart and has most likely used logic to figure out that she doesn't want to be with Perveted Harry.After
person brazilanana
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I've always been a fan of harry/pansy pairings to bad there aren't more of them. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the story especially them moving into an actual relationship (which will be interesting to see how you have people react) .

Harry needs to fess up to his growing reliance and love for Pansy...I hope Pansy doesn' t flip the script and take revenge.

Will Draco be making an actual appearance? I can assume he wouldn't approve of Harry and Pansy. I look forward to more.

Anyway keep up the great work.
person hugplx
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I kind of want to see a her MFM threesome now with Harry/Pansy/anyone other than a Slytherin, lol. Maybe some swinging and stuff too. The couple seems kinky enough and not mean spirited enough to enjoy some equal opportunity play like that. I'd enjoy reading it too, as long as it's equal opportunity.

Wasn't a huge fan of Harry getting pegged, but that's easy enough to skim over.
person red demon
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was hot. I liked that Harry and Pansy punished Daphne together. They bring out the dirty and the worst in each other, I like it. I hope we see the aftermath, Daphne's reaction and so on. Though I wonder what's up with Hermione.
person brazilanana
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way you wrote this story and the power play between Pansy and Harry . She has just as much power in this relationship as Harry
person brazilanana
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I could read this story again and again and never get bored of it. This is the best Harry/Pansy story ever written.
Soooo hot and naughty and hot and yummy and hot! Man oh man, I wonder if Harry is going to tell her he loves her 
person brazilanana
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I also like how Pansy is the one who fell for him first and not the other way around. It just seems a lot more fun this way.
person brazilanana
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Harry is so evil hehehe
person brazilanana
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I adore how thoughtful and concerned Harry is for Pansy's feelings, especially when he realizes he's hurt her or that things have suddenly changed on him.
Harry being stupid around the opposite sex isn't really a deal breaker for me, I was just making an observation.