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for An Odd Crush

by harrypegger

person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry sounds pretty unhinged in this fic, I bet he would
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That's real bad, Pansy will do something drastic if she finds out Harry with mysterious girl ( Hermione or another).
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And will Pansy get jealous when she finds out what Harry did...inquiring minds would like to know : )
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter, please have it up soon!
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pansy just seems to be thinking with pussy and bum. Harry just seems to be thinking with dick.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am interested in where you're taking this and if Harry will come out and tell Pansy that he has feelings for her and if he'll nip this thing with his best friend in the bud before it gets out of hand. Good update.
person brazilanana
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
it's not a love story,only smut. i'm sad.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you haven't abandond the story.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not feeling Hermione in this fic, and if that's your intention, mission not accomplished. I hope Harry ditches her and tells Pansy what's up for real.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
.i
have read this fic And until this chapter the fic. was good and original... but now?... it goes at full speed at the ultra-typical super-used Harry-god-of-sex, Pansy-slut.

After this it's clear Harry is a big SOB for betray his girlfriend... and Hermione is the biggest slut ( fake prude).

I hope Harry and Hermione will be punished for this and the fic don't end as an Harry-harem... way too used... and way too boring...