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Also, you might want to tell me how to adjust the amount.

Pansy's misuse of those 'vocab words' threw me for a minute, then I realised she didn't use any of them quite right (esoteric used awkwardly ['esoteric methods' by itself is non-threatening but she makes it sound like it should be a dire threat], copacetic used to refer to something personally pleasing [instead of a situation resolved in a manner satisfactory to all parties], and 'my reasons for doing so certainly won't be inscrutable' immediately after stating that her reasons for doing so would be as retribution/payback), realised that Daphne was probably right about her having just looked them up the day before and you'd most likely written it that way on purpose. I hope so anyway, because if not I'm pretty sure I'm being a giant dick right now. Well, either way, whether it was a nice touch or a happy accident, I liked it.

This is my favorite story on this site. It's lighthearted, minimal angst, quality writing, and most importantly good smut ;). Love that you make both characters switches as I'm sick of emasculated, bitch Harry stories.

I love this story ;A;

Good on you for keeping up with this story. I haven't actually looked but I can imagine the flak you've caught for the past chapter and I just want to thank you for ignoring the idiots. It's rare to find an author that can just bypass such stupidity. I've been a big fan of the story since the beginning, and it's only going up as far as I'm concerned. These past couple chapters are probably some of the best in my opinion. Keep up the great work!!!

It's great to see this fic updated. It was hot. It loos like Daphne wants to join more often. I assume it was her playing one of the extra Harrys. I don't care for pegging but it seem more like a show of trust on Harry's part, to show Pansy how much he trusts her. I the finish was the best part. Harry was all dominate there and the finish on her face was hot as hell.

This is love smut story Harry/ Pansy ?

Quite a chapter. The mystery girl and the young second year being involved all felt very taboo, both of which added quite a bit of spice to the story. It doesn't surprise me though, the legend of Harry Potter should have guaranteed Harry's virginity was taken by the end of his first year. The idea that a younger precocious girl would be willing isn't all that hard to believe.

This whole thing does say something about Pansy. Harry could do a whole lot worse for a real girlfriend and maybe a future wife than Pansy if she's got such a kinky streak. Life would not be boring.

Very good chapter and story. Thanks for updating!

One of the best Harry/Pansy stories I've ever read!
Loving every bit of it, fantastic work!

Harry was pretty darn selfish when he cheated on Pansy.
Harry likes Pansy? No, He are confusing it with lust .For Harry, this all lust and sex .