I love Harry and Pansy together when it's well written. Hope to see more someday.
Your writing skills are amzazing!
Please do more.
Man this is kinky AF! I love it when’s the next chapter?
I have been at the edge of my seat, and soaking my panties for days as I read this. Pacing myself, of course, sad to see it end. My only note would be that a careful revisement for spelling does wonders. There were some words I had to guess at, and other times 'she' might accidentally be used instead of 'he'.
Hoping to see more from you!
Forgot to add ONE thing:
I very much appreciate that you've picked a moment in time and held true to what was going on in Half-Blood Prince. It is immensely hotter, being that I can picture it going along with the original story. Well done, and I dedicate these orgasms to you.
Chap7, no vanilla next time! I'm glad we are back to the rough stuff. Much better. Pansy needs daily anal
Great. Really looking forward to more. Please update again :D
You`re an evil, teasing Mastermind. Great Chapter, i really enjoyed it.
I hope you will find it in you, to give us another Chapter sometime this Year, instead of a few Years from now. Also i think, now that Harry & Pansy hat their "I love you´s", Harry should deal with the mystery Girl, when she tries to shove him in a Cupboard again. With Harry in a Relationship, i doubt it would feel right, both for you as the Author, as well as us Readers, to see this going more than one final Time now, since it is Assault, and borders on Rape. But i´m sure you will find a satisfying Way to finish that side-story.
Hope to read you soon,
OmniViceUser
Hi, nice Story. Even so i know the last update happened Ages ago, but you said more then once you like feedback, so i try to leave som (hopefully) helpfull thoughts. I believe the best Course of Action would be, to make the next Chapter a S-f-W one, where Harry and Pansy take some Time together to talk, about the nature of their Relationship, and the feelings they have found themselfes developing.
Also, to me it felt that Harry also should have another Talk with Hermione, to fully clear their emotional Connection as well.
Otherwise, a really nice Story, and i hope you get back to it sometime in the Future
Loving this story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.