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This story is simply amazing, I have been enjoying every minute of it. The characters are so well written and the story...I'm so sad I've got up now! you have to hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens next!

This is a great story I'm diggin it keep it up............I love this harry he is awesome I soooo love Neville or Cory I'm so happy he is just as strong willed as harry Luna I never thought that girl was crazy I love her cruel streak.........More chappies please cause I'm holding my breath waiting.

I stand in total awe of Har's BSing abilities. I can't wait till Goatman gets his well deserved smack down. Can't wait to see who Fawks true master is.

OMG its sooo good. I spent the entire day reading it from the beginning to the the latest chapter, I couldn't stop! Can't wait for another post, keep up the excellent work.

please please please update this story! i luv luv luv it! lol. i especially luv how even though harry turned to the dark side, it still ends up a hell of a lot lighter than the light side. great job! please keep writing. please and thank you!!!

I'm going to start off by saying that I absolutely love this story. I can't find a whole lot to actually critique apart from a few minor typo's where it seems like either your spell check changed what you meant to say or you were just typing really fast and didn't notice the mistake. Anyway I adore the way you write the characters and look forward to seeing the update.

I've always been a fan of Hermoine and you've given her quite a beating here, not that she doesn't deserve it due to her actions! But maybe there is hope for her in joining Harry and redeeming herself to him!

Great work as always, cannot wait for more!

wow, quite a bit covered here. I still think killing the entire family is extreme but Har did have a point. I'm glad others are coming around though i think it might take a bit longer to crack Mio's mind open to where she thinks for herself.

I've only read the first chapter and from what I can see it's well-written. The dialog is good, the pacing is even. But you've turned one of my favorite characters into a selfish bitch and that really, really bugs me.

I know this is your story...and obviously your version of the world works the way you'd like it to. But there is nothing in canon to back up Hermione turning on Harry. She obliviated her parents so she could follow him across the country to help him for crying out loud. I'm not sure about you...but I don't think I could give up my parents - not even for my best friend. For a teenaged character she was remarkably supportive of him - even in the face of his taking Ron's side over hers every time he had to make a choice. Hermione, as written by JKR, is a slightly obnoxious twit who is probably too smart for her own good - but she's extremely loyal to Harry and has never picked Ron's side over his - during the TriWizard Tounament or leaving Harry in the tent when Ron abandons them...and she has romantic feelings for Ron at the point in the tent so she chose him over a prospective boyfriend.

LOL, I am not a fan of the Weasleys...but I'm also not a huge fan of bashing and that seems to be where you're headed with this. So, while your story has lots of potential I don't think I'll be continuing, much as I love a good dark!Harry story. Unless you'd like to assure me that your Hermione gets her head out of her ass and begins acting a bit more in character? Damn, I didn't even read enough to see how you treat Snape(he competes with Hermione for top spot as my favorite). It seems to me that most Harry-centric writers, that aren't writing Snarry, tend to see him as the evil villain who needs killing or placement into Azkaban as fast as their little fingers can type him there.

Ah well, keep up your writing, it's done very well even if some of the subject material irks me =P.

Loved it!!! Want more!!!!