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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When is the next update? Or is there a second story that follows this one?
Great story, waiting for more.
Great story, waiting for more.
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October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Just Read up to chapter 22 and I think this story is amazing :D Very well done :D
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October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but I have to correct something here. HUMANS hate and fear what they do not understand, not just non-magicals. The only way to stop that (magicals could never keep their existence totally secret from non-magicals) would be to educate non-magicals and magicals both on what they have to do to get along and bring down the whole "Wall of Secrecy" between the non-magicals and magicals.
The story was fine until the abject stupidity of "Non-magicals would hunt us down and KEEEL US!" started coming into it. Past that point however? 1 out of 10.
The story was fine until the abject stupidity of "Non-magicals would hunt us down and KEEEL US!" started coming into it. Past that point however? 1 out of 10.
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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it will be interesting to see what mio does with herself now. i can very easily see her leaving either the magical world after she graduates or the school at the end of the term.
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
write more it's really good
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this truly is an amazing storyline, in fact Ive just finished reading it for the second time running as I couldn't get over how well the story flows and I loved the interaction between the main characters, I whole heartedly hope that this story will be continued as it is something that every one should read and enjoy, I hope the author completes this story as I simply have to know what happens next !!!
well written, well thought out and well planned, and with some seriously hot scenes thrown in as well( nudge nudge, wink wink lol) but seriously please please please carry this story on, follow it through to the finish, I read a lot of fanfiction and this is easily one of the best Ive ever read.
well written, well thought out and well planned, and with some seriously hot scenes thrown in as well( nudge nudge, wink wink lol) but seriously please please please carry this story on, follow it through to the finish, I read a lot of fanfiction and this is easily one of the best Ive ever read.
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September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great update please update again soon
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September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
REVIEW.... um.. well hmm how to put this about your story its just that... hmm ITS FRIKKEN AWESOME I love dark harry's
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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I made it to Chapter 11 until I couldn't take anymore and I read every chapter of My Immortal 5 times. I mean really animals named after character's from Inuyasha that was just way too much. I love to read bad fanfiction and yours unfortunately has decent grammar. As for the actual story as an AU fanfic it really plays up the most common cliches of AU fanfiction Dumbledore being a complete jackass to Harry, His friends just out to use him, and Harry joining Voldemort. Thanks for keeping the AU standard for Harry Potter.