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What happens???? So many unanswered questions!!!! Help!!!

I love your story, its really good

OMG!! I had just found your story and spent the last four days reading nothing but lol. I love how you are portraying the characters, it's very well done. I have always wanted to find a story where the 'bad guys' win but they are difficult to find (at least well written ones), so I was very excited to read yours. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

P.S. I don't know if anyone has told you yet about the quote in chapter 13 but it reminds me of something said in one of my romance novels. It may not be the exact words but very close. Zarek says something to Talon in 'Night Embrace' by Sherriyn Kenyon that is so close it may just be the exact quote.

I really do love this story, not sure what else to actually say about it other than that fact I love it.... Dumbledore always did seem to confident in his choices and molly was just stupid ;-) can't wait for the next update :-D

Awesome an update :)
\This is one of my top favorite fic of all time and I can't wait for more , severus /tom OMG they are so in love and nagini is enjoying this so much , I hope you update soon

Fantastic chapter!!!!

I recently found this story and started reading, so this comment may be very late. I just finished chapter 6, the one where Harry tells Voldie about his second year, and I have to say I disagree with your beta about that torture scene. After all, Harry basically told Voldemort that by not accepting his mark, that he was an Ally and not a Follower. Torturing a follower is one thing, but torturing an ally for perceived 'mistakes' they made years before during circumstances beyond their control is another. One doesn't torture his allies if one expects to keep them for long. Honestly, had I been Harry in that moment, as soon as Voldie was done I would have called for Hedwig and got the hell out of dodge. I didn't see the Harry you were creating as someone who would finally say Fuck You to Dumbledore's manipulations only to meekly accept the fact that he would be tortured for things that weren't his fault. He was 12, for Merlin's sake. How was he to know that the diary was so vital? I'll keep reading because the story is interesting, but to be honest, I've lost all respect for the Harry you created.

Please continue!!!

Please oh please update soon! If only to reveal the Quibbler's article! I'm dying here...

Nicely done. I'd love to read more so, please, update soon!