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for Rise of the Dark Angel

by isabel88

person Anon
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want Harry to start calling Severus and Tom Dad :P
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how you threw in a little bit of InuYasha, trecool :)
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! I LOVED it! I love the way Severus and Voldemort are together... wonderful writing! Will we get to see anything of Lucius and Remus? Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see another chapter, and harry got his horcrux removed finally. lol loved the bit about asking lucius or sev for sex stuff. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next :)
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic! Very interested to see what happens when Harry and the others get back to Hogwarts, Dumbledore will get the shock of his life!! Please update soon!
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u take longer and longer 2 post ur next chapters but im beginning 2 think that they r worth the wait...I loved this chapter but i hate the cliffy...hope 2 read more soon...
Kat
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This chapter was a lot to take in. I can't imagine how long it took to write! I love how much thought you put into the whys and hows of your characters actions. Like with why Harry loves Draco and the Voldy's stance on muggles. Also, I never really thought about Colin sending wizarding pictures home to a muggle family. Just one more thing for me to think about.
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The chapters are how I like 'em nice, long, and detailed! the only thing i've seemed to notice is that there seem to be tiny plot holes in some spots. they turn up when you do time jumps or scene jumps. I just thought I would tell you. Also I really like how you are taking this story. Harry and Voldie teaming up, with just about EVERY character I like! it means Fred and George don't get seperated! Fred doesn't DIE and George doesn't lose an ear! I like how Nev. is a LeStrange and how Luna isn't as looney as in the books. The whole conspiracy thing is amazing as well. It makes you wonder some of the things weren't ever brought up in the book. I mean really Colin shouldn't of done that and MOLLY should've known better. Oh and I would've had Ginny die in the 2nd book as well. I can't stand the girl.
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Glad to see Harry and Draco's missions a success. I will be looking forward to the next installment.
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still love everything that u have done so far with this story...i really love all the characters...keep up the GREAT work...