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for LOST IN THE DARK

by PHOENIXFURYFIRE

person jami_lee
schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!! I hope you finish this one day!!
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry as a girl also and like LV, I wonder why Harry would be with the light. Looks really interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. p
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and how original. I certainly hope that you continue with your story. Hate to say it, but I would love to see Harry smack Dumbledore and tell him what a jerk he had been for letting "those people" abuse him/her. Looking forward to more. p
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your plot would be better if Voldie didn't resort to potions to make Harry forget & turn. LV is very manipulative and he 'saved' Harry. Turning or at least making Harry neutral should be possible without making 'him' forget the past. That might even work in LV's favor if it paints Albus as a controlling manipulative bastard who is just trying to mold the ultimate Light 'weapon'
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow interesting more please.
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it, but They should be equals. Don't make it easy for Tom, and Harry or Ara should be both Lion and Snake. Wouldn't it be ironic that Harry was born a girl but Dumfuck changed her to a boy, and Lily was a pure blood desended from Firestone's line. Not Salazar's. Firestone could of been related to Griffindor? Well any way love the story keep going.
person Selera
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Umm wow that was hot! Oh I look forward to seeing this relationship develope. Is it bad that I want that to be reality??? O_O;;;
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it