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for Cottage in a Cornfield

by sjansons

schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be so sweet. I loved it!
person Liz
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like the story; however, you need to change your description. Hermione isn't doing "voluntary" work; she's doing volunteer work. If you don't know the difference, check a dictionary.
person ningloreth
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
From the Collins English Dictionary website:

voluntary work
noun
work that is done by the aid of volunteers
'What opportunities are there for voluntary work?', 'In her spare time she does voluntary work.'


person Trelweny
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating story. I've always loved the "living in a painting" concept; it really hit home for me watching "Witches" back in the day even if that IS a rather depressing version of the theme and extremely short-played.

I think this is incredibly sweet... and yet at the same time monumentally Sad when I think of how their friends must miss them terribly. Especially to be gone with no word at all. Still... I'm always one for Draco's happiness over all so it's win.

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very very cute
person kittycat30
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!
person amsev
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Simply lovely!
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful little story that said so much with very few words. It was a nice start to my morning thanks.
person apkblack
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Already reviewed at H&V, but it's such a treat to see this story anywhere, that I'll review again.

What I love most about this story, despite the fact that it's about witches and wizards and this magical universe we're all so used to, is that it feels almost like a new kind of magic they're doing here, and it feels so special, when they're inside the painting. Have actually copied the painting to my computer and it's now my desktop background ...

Thanks for writing it.
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Thank you for such a sweet story.