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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... some pretty disturbing imagery in there but was great! Good job! There were a few comments in parentheses that looked like editting suggestions you hadn't taken out, you might want to hunt those out and delete them.
schedule
October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. Great method of pulling me into the story!