rate_review Reviews

I just figured out that ending and I'm pretty sure I've read all of the companion pieces a million times over, but it just clicked together and I think I love you for it. You're the greatest writer ever and I am simply not worthy. I can't believe its taken me this long to figure everything out. Ugh I'm a moron....

Wait, what? what was with that last line? This is...is...wow. A very intense fic. I love that you characterize Nott as the watcher. I like that you have him notice not only things that aren't in Canon, but also things that are, such as Harry and the Half Blood Prince's potions book.

The Cruciatus part...wow. That was more vividly written than anything I've read in the Harry Potter books themselves! It was more scary. The details about Draco's pain limit, crying for his mother...oh god. I felt awful for Draco. So intense!

The ending confused me and surprised me though...but overall, I enjoyed the fic and your writing style. Can there be more such Nott fics of what he's seen? It's an innovative concept.

I like how you characterize Draco "Blood Failure," and "mud", and Blaise is the cool composed one. I forgot he was Head Boy...

Whoa! This was a great shot, too. First off, let me state that Theo is a weirdo (lame term but, whatever). Ah, let's use cynical; Theo's a cynic, and a down straight creepy one. 'His only real passion was watching people.' I could have died when I instantly imagined myself in green and silver robes, clutching a stome pillar, peeking around a corner... Poor Draco. I want him to grow some balls, even little kitten balls would work! And the sex! oh man, I loves me some fucking right after a torture.
-Wal Mart guy