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xDDDDDDDDD The ending! Oh the ending! I'm not sure I'll ever be able to breathe again for laughing.

Oh but the rest...damn, you have Draco *perfect*! And this is Draco from the books, the whiny, fearful little bastard, not some swaggering hunk that fanfiction created. I love that you are writing Canon Draco. It is amazing. And the way Blaise plays with him, and the way Draco tries to be unemotional but fails...love it. Good writing!

I think one of my favorite parts was, "Potter tried to kill me." Ha!

Well done, Lythande, I must say! I particularly liked the taunting from Blaise. He IS quite literally becoming something of a social inadequate. I really enjoyed the tension before the "almost" sex... the ruffling of the hair, the wrestling with the robes.
"I'll keep you warm."
"Right... You're too cold for that."
"I thought you were going to quit bitching."
"Never..."
AWESOME lines!!!

oh and ps, the oh fuck off!/ how about "fuck me" was epic! And wtf about Madam Pomfrey's Boner Killer Jinx?!?
-Wal Mart guy

lol i love that !