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by devsgma

schedule December 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Nice story again. I am disappointed that it is not completed. It is really a shame. I hope you will complete it. 

schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!! Lucius and Severus getting into a food fight while having a supposedly, civilized cup of tea?! Ridiculous! Hilarious! They are too old for that shit! And too stuffy! Sirius and Remus, maybe. But not Lucius and Severus!
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was all rather amusing.
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! :D Please, update again soon? ^-^ <3
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful - absolutely brilliant. You have Snape down perfectly. And I also believe, as you obviously do, that Snape doesn't hate Harry solely for his resemblance with James Potter, but resents him for the fact, that he could/should have been his son - and wasn't.

Can't find anything to criticise at all - so, on with the story.
person Di
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter! Thanks for the update!
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I finally got to read this after enjoying the other one so much. I loved your recap of the last story, but from his point of view. It definitely went a long way to making me not dislike him as much. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good one! Thank you for that little Lucius interlude. It's nice to know he's softened somewhat (although he did almost call Hermione that name...jerk) to his friends at least and knows when he is in debt. I only hope Severus learns to drop some of his suspicion and anger, before he drives Hermione away by mistake. He's got to fully understand that she, without great provocation, would never keep him from his son. I know he's got YEARS of pain and angst to get over, but he needs to do it, at least where Hermione is concerned, so he can start to move forward. Of course, it would help if Hermione told him the truth of that night. Sigh... maybe she needs to get so drunk she just blurts out the story. lol Thank you and please update again soon, HG4eva
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I demand that someone make more biscuits for Lucius. That will be all.

~CC
person Angie30
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The image of those two throwing food at each other is just too funny! Im really enjoying this story so far and look forward to more.