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Great story! I love the ending!

the ending was hilarious

Dame I love the way you write and talk about hottt and bothered that's me from reading that great story please keep up the awesome work......you keep writing and I'll keep on ah reading.............

ahaha! "Albus!" I love the ending. Freakin' hilarious!

I loved this soo much!!!!!

haha this was a good short story! i hope you write more :)

Hello! I really liked the premise, plot, and style of your story! Snape's costume was spot on! It just cracked me up! I loved how free the two of them were with each other, protected as they were by their anonymity.

I think the execution of this fic was very good, despite the lack of beta support. You have a real gem here and I'd like to to help you bring out it's full potential! I've never been a beta, but I'm bilingual, have my BA, am a total bookworm, and always did well in grammar/revision. If you would like my help, please let me know--however one does that on adultfanfiction.net... I'm new here! :-)

ok, now that was great..you have so got to post more to this..i am holding my breath trying not to laugh..i can just picture it.

Great story! I hope you write an epilogue. :)

lol! I mean LOL!!!!!! That was priceless! I want another who else was at the party ! Who was batman was it harry?