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for A Mask of Gold [Complete]

by MallowCakes

schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the ending!
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the ending was hilarious
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dame I love the way you write and talk about hottt and bothered that's me from reading that great story please keep up the awesome work......you keep writing and I'll keep on ah reading.............
person draecana
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahaha! "Albus!" I love the ending. Freakin' hilarious!
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this soo much!!!!!
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha this was a good short story! i hope you write more :)
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I really liked the premise, plot, and style of your story! Snape's costume was spot on! It just cracked me up! I loved how free the two of them were with each other, protected as they were by their anonymity.

I think the execution of this fic was very good, despite the lack of beta support. You have a real gem here and I'd like to to help you bring out it's full potential! I've never been a beta, but I'm bilingual, have my BA, am a total bookworm, and always did well in grammar/revision. If you would like my help, please let me know--however one does that on adultfanfiction.net... I'm new here! :-)
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok, now that was great..you have so got to post more to this..i am holding my breath trying not to laugh..i can just picture it.
person EvaBrick
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I hope you write an epilogue. :)
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol! I mean LOL!!!!!! That was priceless! I want another who else was at the party ! Who was batman was it harry?