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for Saving Her; Saving Us All

by Illiandyandra

schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like all the POV's you gave in this chapter. Thanks for the heads up that the next chapter concerns Pansy and the trial. Will the harsh reality sink in Ginny's brain? You know, I wouldn't be too surprised if Dumbledore was trying to pull some strings on Pansy's behalf. I always see him as manipulative...
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that you captured so many of them and their thoughts/feelings in that chapter. I can't wait to see Pansy get hers! Beyotch! And, WTF is up with Dumbledore?! Can he go be punished with Pansy? :-) Thanks, hon! HG4eva
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not sure if you talking about me when you said flames are rude, glad ron said he was sorry, disagree with you about ron turning his back on hermoine third year she stop talking to him, since he did do well in school he not that lazy, but good story.

person lyra666
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far and i cant wait to see where it goes from here thank you for wrighting it
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE SMUT!!!! So many possibilties :)

I did like the POVs, that was great.

I hope that Albus gets what is coming to him too. along with Pansy.
person noorlisa
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like the way this story is going, I totally agree with your characterization of manip Dumbles, he deserves everything that is coming, I hope more than just the melting of his precious monitoring instruments; I also hate Molly and Ginny, detest Ron....well you can safely say I am waiting for more chapters to this story.Are they going to live in a fantastic italian villa?Or are they going to have fabulous holidays in Black island?? Best of luck
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love love love it!!! Really interesting the way you explained each man's presence in and importance to Hermione's life. Also enjoyed how you showed what changes can result from just a small shift in language--sometimes just one word or change in tone, enunciation, etc. can have a major effect on meaning (and with magic, it's all about the intent, right?).

I'm down with the men getting freaky with each other, but I agree with some of my fellow reviewers on the MPreg issue--I love Harry as a caring and nurturing father but PLEASE don't have him carry the babies (pleasepleasepleaseprettyplease...)!
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fun, funny, informative and interesting. I like the idea of them being together forever. And, I have to say, I think her parents are handling all of this EXCEEDINGLY well. lol Thank you! Please update again soon, HG4eva
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Regarding the bonding between the men to me it would be natural. After all, there is only one Hermione so that would make sense that the bond would bring everyone closer as they can feel each others emotions.
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While I'm not a fan of full-blown male/male sex, as long as it stops short of that or has a warning break before and after (slash starts here, skip to next chap, or next break type thing), it's all good. Keep up the excellent work on the story, I especially liked the comments in the sub-chapter breaks, especially testicular fortitude and ass hat :) great job, can't wait for the next chapter :)