rate_review Reviews

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it. Love the plot! I really loved that you used Fred and George's pranks in a much better way then JK did in her book. My husband and I both thought that she pretty much ingnored the twins in the last couple of books. Can't wait to read more, and thanks for sharing!

Y'know, I keep coming back and hoping I maybe missed an update, but no luck so far. I really, really, really, miss this story, and I'd love to know how everything works out. Guess I'll just have to keep checking, (sigh).

Now that's a cliffie! Loved the Oz reference and the touch of Robert Frost (I think, My poetry reading is a little lacking) as well. Remind me to never piss off Neville; my garden would never be the same.

That was wonderful! I even like the part where Moldyshort seems to have survived, initially.

Missing you Missing you!!!! Please don't left us hanging your stories are wonderful.....

i absolutely love this story, it has it all. Hot, steaming sex between my favourite characters, a true punishment of Dumbledore (compliments on that one, you "attacked" so much of what I found lacking about him, especially his neglect in truly figthing the dark side), Molly and Ginny bashing and not at least a wonderful balance and control in your plot. I am very much looking forward to read more of this story!!!

I absolutely love this story. The first chapter is hilarious. Especially when I figured out that one of the afterlife counselors were based on Reba McIntyre. Can't wait til your next update. By and by how do I get notification of updates? I actually don't like this site much anymore except for a few stories(yours being two of them).

I reread this whole story this weekend. Love it -- was glad to see an update! Looking forward to seeing how the confrontation goes down.

Absolutely brilliant reworking of the original story! In spite of the numerous grammatical and spelling errors, which I would be DELIGHTED to correct, and are what I would expect in a second draft, ready to go to an outside editor, the plot itself is, imo, far better and more interesting than the original. In fact, this is what I would have RATHER seen from the original. I'm not much into "talking dirty" but you actually make it sound like fun. You address every single objection a Muggle girl would have with an arrangement like this, and frankly, your open and honest descriptions of omnisexuality and the effects of bigotry should be widely celebrated as how we should ALL be handling these subjects. I desperately want the re-done final battle, and a chapter that sees them all through being crowned actual queen and kings of the Wizarding Europe (a Magical EU?!), and perhaps even an epilogue with how they handle parenting the heirs of the houses, and the future queen (Hermione and Harry have a firstborn heir...or should that be Hermione and Severis?) Your creative genius and knowledge of your subjects are astounding! Even without the breathtaking sex, this story would be outstanding! Again fucking BRILLIANT!!!! ^.^

I like this story very much! You brought in a lot of qualities that I like about other stories, and the sex scenes are great!