rate_review Reviews

I love the crossover. And, the pairing is great!
I'm curious to see, though.....how you will let the pairing work. I do want a happy ending!!!! But, when the trouble is over and they return to their homes...Harry and Peter are from two different periods of time. Of course.....you could have them be from the same time and allow them to be together. Maybe, Peter(and his brother and sisters) can return with harry and help him save his world.

FIRST REVIEW STAMP OF APPROVAL

This is quite a lovely beginning - I do adore crossovers, and a Narnia/Potter is a fresh idea, I believe (or at least, fresh for my oldness *g*)

Your dialog is expertly done, and your descriptions are kept wonderfully to-the-point. I love when fan-authors take for granted that their readers are well aquanted with the characters (really, why would you read fan fiction if you weren't???). It frees up so many paragraphs for more interesting things (like smut, of course! *g*)

Good job, lady writer, and keep it up!

PS; please ignore spelling errors - writing this on my phone and the tiny letter buttons irk me like nothing else

Great start! I'm not actually big on most crossovers. It has to be both plausible and well written for me to even bother with it. So Congratulations! You're one of those few talented souls, and I do so hope that you'll continue. I'd really love to see where this goes. All the crossovers that actually catch my interest never seem to make it past the first couple of chapters.

best of luck ^^

great story so far :) I've never read a story where anyone uses the horn to call Harry, it feels good to read something different for a change :D Update soon!

WOW!! I read alot of Hp/TlTw&Twd Crossovers... but not a Hp/PC crossover. I like it!!

Can't wait to see what happens!

i love ti