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April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hi
love this so far
please keep updating
cullengal101
love this so far
please keep updating
cullengal101
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please tell me somehow when you put up the next chapter please! I really enjoyed reading this and I loved the banter between hp + aslan ("you must be ancient then") :P ♥
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October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story please update soon
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've come to this site for almost a year now, and I just realized there was a review feature.
Narnia really doesn't seem to get much love in fictions like this, but you don't displease with that and make up for the different pairing of fictions with a cohesive reason for the crossover.
Another enjoyable point is that, at the moment, this fiction holds one of the few slash fictions for Narnia without it being direct smut. The hot boys without shirts gets close but thats totally okay with me. If there is any sex in this story I do believe it is almost too soon for it and it would fit much later after a lot of twists and turns in the story. A reward in a way for those able to read after so long.
The downsides are very small at the moment as my memory tries to remember details from the first few chapters. The only thing I could think of is the short chapters, which I fully understand, and the lack of updates, which you explained. Anything else I'll have to derive from future updates and chapters for another review.
So overall at the moment this story is quite pleasing and interesting.
Narnia really doesn't seem to get much love in fictions like this, but you don't displease with that and make up for the different pairing of fictions with a cohesive reason for the crossover.
Another enjoyable point is that, at the moment, this fiction holds one of the few slash fictions for Narnia without it being direct smut. The hot boys without shirts gets close but thats totally okay with me. If there is any sex in this story I do believe it is almost too soon for it and it would fit much later after a lot of twists and turns in the story. A reward in a way for those able to read after so long.
The downsides are very small at the moment as my memory tries to remember details from the first few chapters. The only thing I could think of is the short chapters, which I fully understand, and the lack of updates, which you explained. Anything else I'll have to derive from future updates and chapters for another review.
So overall at the moment this story is quite pleasing and interesting.
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're doing well. I don't find the chapters long enough, but that just proves that they're interesting enough to leave me wanting more. I'm glad Harry's isn't freaking out about getting home anymore. An entire story of that would be stressful to read. I'm looking forward to seeing how he manages to help the Narnians.
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic, hope to see more.
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Never thought of this crossover, but I love it!
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol poor Harry. Love the new chapter can't wait for more.
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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is my second HP/CON cross, and the other one was the same pairing! lol So far I am enjoying this one better, because it's much more...enticingly written. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this.
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October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. makes one wonder. can't wait to ssee what happpens.