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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT...Thank you so much!!!
Give me a dominate sex demon and a submissive sex slave any day of the week. This was even more than I could have hoped for. It was absolutely wonderful, smutty, sweaty, and extra HOT!!!
I loved the "fuck me" collar, that was priceless!
More, please!
Give me a dominate sex demon and a submissive sex slave any day of the week. This was even more than I could have hoped for. It was absolutely wonderful, smutty, sweaty, and extra HOT!!!
I loved the "fuck me" collar, that was priceless!
More, please!
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much. Due to this last chapter, my own dirty little "demon" is talking. Question, do you have any stories on fanfiction.net: if so, I'd like to check them out since I have a story in progress on that particular site.
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
An amazing chapter, Also loved Hermione finally getting shut down by Harry.
The Harry/Lilly Smutt wasn't all too bad, I don't think another visit to that would be good though, would make Harry seem like he is out for his own mum.
<3 Great Chapter.
The Harry/Lilly Smutt wasn't all too bad, I don't think another visit to that would be good though, would make Harry seem like he is out for his own mum.
<3 Great Chapter.
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. thanks for coming up with it and posting it
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your having snape as headmaster in this fic has a huge problem compared to canon. It happened in canon because voldemort had also taken over the ministry by that time, so there was no one to challenge it, no one to declare snape a criminal.
But in this fic, you're having snape get the job despite the ministry still being under scrimgouer, who thought snape was a deatheater as much as harry does. Why on earth wouldn't they just arrest snape, like was tried by fudge in ootp? The ministry was able to appoint umbridge to the head job back then when dumbledore went on the run.
So it really makes no sense at all that snape could kill dumbledore, flee the scene with the DE's, but still get the headmaster job unless the ministry is controlled by voldemort. ootp proved the ministry CAN interfere in hogwarts and override the board in many ways, I just don't see rufus not doing that here and declaring snape a terrorist criminal, inelligable to hold the position and appointing minerva or someone instead.
But in this fic, you're having snape get the job despite the ministry still being under scrimgouer, who thought snape was a deatheater as much as harry does. Why on earth wouldn't they just arrest snape, like was tried by fudge in ootp? The ministry was able to appoint umbridge to the head job back then when dumbledore went on the run.
So it really makes no sense at all that snape could kill dumbledore, flee the scene with the DE's, but still get the headmaster job unless the ministry is controlled by voldemort. ootp proved the ministry CAN interfere in hogwarts and override the board in many ways, I just don't see rufus not doing that here and declaring snape a terrorist criminal, inelligable to hold the position and appointing minerva or someone instead.
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmm cool chappy so eedgecombe wants to play hard ball huh silly old fool!!
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to keep begging until you do a Harry/Hermione's mom scene! Do you have any idea how hard those are to come by and how in demand they are? Just please make the scene!
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG...doing IT during the wedding; that was PRICELESS!!!!
I love where this story is going. There are plots and sub-plots and you NEVER know what will happen next.
If you and Dark Xavier ever wish to have Hermoine have a flashback, I would like to request that it come from "Price to Play the Game" After Harry's meeting with Dumbledore regarding Ron and Nott's duel, he is angry and frustrated..."after that encounter with the headmaster he had dragged his Alpha into their bedroom and had dominated her for three hours before she passed out from the shagging he gave her." I would love to hear all of the hot, kinky, sticky, sweaty, and lurid details of that particular encounter!!!! But as you know, I am a slut for a Dominate/submissive smut scene.
As always, more please!
I love where this story is going. There are plots and sub-plots and you NEVER know what will happen next.
If you and Dark Xavier ever wish to have Hermoine have a flashback, I would like to request that it come from "Price to Play the Game" After Harry's meeting with Dumbledore regarding Ron and Nott's duel, he is angry and frustrated..."after that encounter with the headmaster he had dragged his Alpha into their bedroom and had dominated her for three hours before she passed out from the shagging he gave her." I would love to hear all of the hot, kinky, sticky, sweaty, and lurid details of that particular encounter!!!! But as you know, I am a slut for a Dominate/submissive smut scene.
As always, more please!
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't been able to review lately. Still enjoying the blood, guts, and smut!
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story develop, so many random ideas put together in a good manner to keep the reader going. +1