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Very nice update!!! FYI: the links for Hermione & the Chang's pics don't work.

should continue this story its gettin really good then stops not fun

Plese tell me how many chapters you have planned. I wanna see this to the finish

will Edgecombe die?

Oh, this chapter had me nearly rolling on the floor with the comment from Dean and Semus. But Neville's was PRICELESS!!!!!

I can just imagine a castle full of horny teenagers *wicked smirk*

I love the idea that Harry let Caley know that Trixie and Tracie were submissive sluts by thier own choice.

I can't wait to see who the Snake is that was watching Luna and Ron!?!?!?!? The plot thickens.

don't stress over the late... hot lemons mean forgiveness in my book and it's fine if you've got a life other than aff. Get back to us when you can.

WOW! This is quite the story. I do think how ever that Harry should be much more virle, seeing as he is part Demon. If he is capable of tking that many wives, he should be more able to satisfy them. Just my opinion. So as he seems to be more human in that reguard, how about writing in a way to make the females happier? (Happier is used losley.) For one as Tonks is able to morph, she could easily take on Harry's male form. That way there would be two males, (on special occasions, like female birthdays) to please the wife. Possibly even to cloning another Harry, or magically conjuring another one. So on special occasions there could be three Harrys'. They could perform a three-way on the special girl at that time.
Or maybe as seeing how the girls are so willing to share, maybe Harry would be willing to take on other males to keep the harem happy. (Being male, I always thought that a female fantasy would be having as many holes filled at once as possible. I might be wrong on that though, at least for some females.) (Of course the males enlisted would have to be steril.) Seeing as several of the harem have already experienced all orifices being filled, maybe having all filled at once would be something worth writing?
Great story , & wanting very much to finding out the ending, (and of course everything leading there).

Great chapter!! Only wish you had given the 'graphic' details of what happened to Nott, Crabbe, and Goyle. It would have been VERY interesting!!

More, please!

i really don't like it when you make ginny out to be the bad guy

molly i can deal with

but ginny got a crash course in life's not how it's cracked up to be in book 2

but you and almost everybody else sees her as an evil little harpy it's not fair to her

Oh, I LOVE the succubus!!!!! I can't wait until Harry unleashes it against Nott, Crabbe, and Goyle. But I think Draco should have a differant punishment...maybe something to do with his aunt and/or mother. What does your deliciously evil mind think?!?!?!

What wonderful smut....MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!

It looks like Harry is starting lose control of his demon half while the demon is slowly taking control of him.