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"Sie wird unterbrochen" means "She is interrupted" not "You will be broken"

Nice. Hope to read about Harry making a Anastasia's dreams come true.

I rarely come to adultfanfiction.net, and when I do it's usually to ready Buffy fics. But I am enjoying your story.

First off I just wanted to say that I am highly impressed with the imaginative, and very well done story line that you have produced in this. As a big fan of Harry Potter and many of the off shoots that others have wrote in what they believe should have happened in the book or in this case their own twist to the story and re-creation of it. The story has a lot of imagination and everything integrates together with remarkable flow. I have been reading this for a couple weeks now but decided to not review it until I saw more of it develop. Seeing more than enough now I have finally felt that I should make a review. Very wonderfully done, very well done indeed, I hope you will continue writing this one to the very end. I will however to see the end of this writing because it is so well done. Unlike many other potter writings this one captivates my attention and won't let go. Every time I read it I just can't seem to stop and that has rarely happens. To be completely honest I have this page bookmarked and its placed as one of my homepages that pops up first in my browser. Keep writing my friend keep writing, you have a marvelous piece of work here and I hold my breath in anticipation of every next chapter that you post.
By the way do you want any comments if we see any grammatical errors, spelling and stuff like that? or repeats of things that appear? Didn't know how you would react so I didn't put down any that I saw, some people don't take constructive criticism too well sometimes.

Its nice to see that is story is alive.

Still reading, great story. Looking forward to the rest. Hopefully not to far in the future.

yep, still reading and happy you have taken your time with this, due to my lap top crashing and being forced to using an old clunker that was an exercise in frustration. It's so nice to be able to answer and not have to wonder if my compy is going to crash on me before i get a chance to finisdh my review.
wow, tom jr realllllllly has no chance of winning this trial. :/
despite his horrendous childhood.

Still reading and enjoying.

I have been reading this story for quite awhile and I love it. Some concrit though... I would love to see more detail in conversations and dialog, to have smooth transitions between the scenes. I've been quite lost for the last 2ish chapters because information comes flying out of nowhere. Besides that slight problem I love this! It's a great idea for a plot and I always loved a badass Harry. haha
Happy writing!

Thanks for the new chapter... love this story. Thanks for all your hard work, it was worth the wait :-)
your fan,
Layne