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person pfeil
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so he gets Gabby in the future? Nice.
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so many people when they write a harry and hermoie or harry and haram, they make ron a jerk, and act like ron and hermoein where never friends, so thank you for makeing him a good guy.

some time you need a guy to keep you in line, but hemonie can try.

draco going to go ape shit, harry sleeping with his mom.

keep writing.
person Shawn
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Yah.
great 3rd chapter.
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so far, i love that ron not a jerk. and i hope that ron and hermoie be come best frineds.

ron with luna and a nother girl would be cool they could teach him some how to be a better man.

ron could stand up to harry to make sure he does not go crazy with power.


as you can tell i am a ron fan, harry and hermoine can work.

good story.
person azphxbrd
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start for a story,looking forward to more.I got to say using Petuna for a fantasy is sick.
person Y
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start, cant wait for next chapter...will ginny be in this?
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good. Normally I avoid harem stories, but this one looked better than most. i wait to see where you take it! :)
person Shawn
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awsome so far. i Cant wait until the other chapters. Also can u mention Harry's size. anyways great story and i love the plot :)
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i just hope this is not one of there story, where ron turns into a jackass, and every body hate him. i alway thought if harry going to have a lot of summive women it would be nice to have a best friend that would stand by him, and tell him when he going over bord.