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The dashes showed up. Damn the story keeps getting better and smuttier. lol. I love it.

Great story, please continue.

Good chapter,Well Harry dropped a bomb on Dumbledore,I cant wait till the next bomb explodes in Voldemort's hands.

Good last few chapters,I have been playing catchup.I am glad you answered my question chapter 2,I bet James fantasy was to younger Petuna.I am glad that Hermione hooked up with Harry and solved the Love potion spiking problem at the Weasleys.I see Narcissa was in deep trouble,all I can say Tom and Bella set her and Snape up royally using Draco as the bait.Now that Narcissa one of Harry's women,they are going screw the Malfoy resouces up under Tom's flat nose taking half the Malfoy fortune and ten percent to the goblins which adds up to sixty percent of Lucius's vault.OUCH! Narcissa is highly motivated to get back at Bellatrix,watch your back Bella along with you Tom.

Oh this story is getting better and better. But what happen to Ginny. I can't wait to see if they more like Bella.

To answer your question, Ragnok is the better choice, as Harry is now what a muggle bank would consider a top-ranked 'preferred' customer/client. Griphook was working the front desk and obviously wouldn't be of high enough status for such a large account. I like not making Ron an ass, it gets old after a while; also, the Black sisters are an unusual twist that will make for some interesting developements, I'm sure. You have a few typos and some mis-chosen words that you might want to go back and clean up in the earlier chapters. For example: in ch. 3 there are commas on your pause marks (I just...,I don't know...,sometimes). just the three periods, no commas are needed. I like it so far, don't get me wrong; it's just a bit distracting when I'm reading. Waiting for more.

Stick with what you wrote, someone that powerful would have the head goblin to talk to. another good chapter by the way.

First off, yes, Ragnok should have been to one to meet Harry in Chapter 2. Only the Goblin King could have kept Harry calm and helped him understand the significance of the Black family ring.

As to the smut...I am so looking forward to it. I hope that you are VERY detailed. Especially when he takes Bella; for I foresee that she will be the one who allowes Harry 100% of her core.

But how will Harry keep all of his concubines hiden when he returns to Hogwarts? Unless he is Head Boy, or Hermoine is Head Girl.

When and how will Dumbeldore react to the fact that Harry is the the "Head" of the Ancient house of Black? Also, what else is in his parent's will that the Headmaster is so afraid of?

Good chapter,Look out Tom because your most trusted minion will be spilling the beans.The ministry will eventually know the deatheater membership,Tom's headquarters,safe houses,supply warehouses,and current & future planned operations.I hope she mind recovers from her abusive past family along with greiving from her deatheater life.

I love it