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Good chapter,
I see Tonks the double agent is working out fine.
Tom has finally realized he has lost 150% of his former funding (Malfoy and Lestrange money),and he is worried about family contractual obligations.
I think Lord Chang better watch out because Voldy,Dumbledore heard the marriage plot through the grapevine while the MLE knows for sure.
Finally,I hope that Snape or anyone finds out about Harry's family hereditary backround.
Question: Whats McLaggan doing to get under his skin considering he not playing on the team.

poor harry I love it

know not no. and pensive not pencive. loved the chapter and the threesome at the end.

Good chapter,
First: I hope see that he is batting for wrong side,I dont think he knew all details of his mother's fate.
Second: Harry sure laid the law down on Lord Chang,I wonder if he will change his mind on the deal and retailiate against Harry?
Lastly: I beleive that Harry has turned Dumbledore's agent,Is Harry going to use her as a double agent to keep tabs on Dumbledore and the Order?
Thats all for now.

Nice story. I like the plot and who is in the harem. Your sex scenes are kinda short though. I'd really like it if you tried lengthening them by at least 2 times. More anal sex would be great too.

I got a good idea for what Hermione should do to Tonks. Use a spell to give herself, Bella, and Narcissa dicks and gang rape her. I think that would be really hot. I'd also like to see that spell used beyond punishment; it'd make the threesome/moresomes hotter.

Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!

The rest of the harem MUST realize that Hermoine is a force to be reconed with. Don't make the alpha mad or she WILL retaliate! I am glad to see that she is taking her role seriously; especially in the sexual sense and not just the intillectual sense.

I loved the part with Narcissa and the parsaltounge, that was priceless. I hope that Harry shares that particular bit of information with Draco...he will just explode.

Welcome to the harem Tonks!! Albus is going to have a cow.

I am curious as to why and to what end Harry will use the list of Cho's possible husbands, that he demanded from Mr. Chang?

Since Harry has already commented that he plans to marry Bella and Cho; will he be marrying ALL of his Harem? This will truely turn the wizarding world on its ear, since the harems have only shown one 'concubine' as the Lady of the House. I would hope that he makes his marriage to Hermoine a large extravegent show for all to see...she IS is alpha after all.

Oops, sorry about that last one

This is definitely getting interesting but the only problem i am finding with this story, is the lack of details for things.

I think you need to get a bit more creative with details on important events,

Keep up the good work and the harem ;)

oh god i love it. 10 more stars for this chapter. Put all the star in a jar for now, still thinking of something to do with them.

Good chapter,

Draco Malfoy jealousy is starting to flair up when he saw Harry with Hermoine and Cho on his arms.Two certain ladies of Slytherin and Hufflepuff are thinking about joining his entrogue of ladies.I can't wait to see Draco's rage burn him up alive when he sees Harry's bodyguards.

I dont know about Ginny,but she diffently knows that following her mother's advice has screwed her life royally along with regretting her past action.

the comment in ch 8, it seem that harry and hermoine do not thank to much of ron, and sad he going to stay with just one girl. like the nevil spanking ginny, and harry haveing a lot of fun. like that ron going to help keep him in check. great story.