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...Tonks's Auror trained body and Harry's quidditch toned body...
I have 2 tiny comments. 1) Tonks' body is whatever shape she wants it to be, so talking about it being auror trained is irrelevant. 2) Sitting on a broom all day does not tone a body. Quidditch by definition would never help anyone get into shape any more than sitting on a recliner.

awesome job keep up the good work fantastic story and excellent writing as well i hope you continue to write this story for everyone to enjoy

what i would like to hear and have not yet is about the attacks on voldimorts bases. the attacks were to take place about the same time as the welcoming feast or shortly there after. an i am rather sure tom knows if 17 of his bases and 143 deatheaters were taken down in a 2 hour time span so it is not like it is a big secret.i mean once someone goes to one base an finds out it was weiprd out they will report to tom and he will have all the other bases checked. i think it would also be smart to start keeping deatheater prisoners at different prisons around the world so it would not be so easy for tom to get him deatheaters back by simpley attack only one prison, which of course tom has shown he can walk into whenever he wants. also toms main power base is england so he would have a harder time getting his people back without have men on the inside unless his troops use mind control curses. of course even then it takes time to scout out the right person to control. personally i think other countries would have defences against things like that in the way of loyalty oaths that would shut there body down if an outside force tried to take them over.

with a safe guard like a loyallty oath that shuts your body down there would be no way to get into such a goverment by tom and his people since even if you tried kidnapping the persons family the oath would see that as an attempt to overthow the goverment and shut the persons body down. spys would do no go either since the moment they took the oath there own magic would shut the down. reading there mind is no good since thier own magic would rather kill them then allow them to be used to overthrow the goverment. such an oath in great britain would likely have stopped a great number of dark lords from being much of a real threat.

Great!!!!I love the tonks storyline.the explanatoion of how Harry feels about people in generalis spot on.keepit comming,looking forward to the next chapture.

Definitely a great story so far, though maybe have a future girl for harry's harem be a futa?

good she still mad at ron, funny you think she would understand, the girl he love was with some else. love the line ron going claw hunting that him he defend those he loves.

I am so loving this story!!! Sex, sex, and more sex; it is a wonder that anything is being learned in school.

I love that Neville has taken 'his' girls in hand *evil snicker*

I like that Lin has the ability to take ALL of Harry down her throat, who knew she had such a talent. I also, love that the harem are quite capable of taking care of each other (and even others outside of the harem) to 'address' their needs. Harry does need to spend some time outside of the bedchamber!!!!

When will Tonks learn?!?!?!?! I think she just want Hermoine to truely punish her, maybe bound and flogged or even a good pegging? Then Tonks can be Hermoine's ultimate submissive; like Bella and Lin are to Harry.

Keep up the good work, its good to see these getting more chapters again, and hope you guys can spit them out a bit faster :D

And I'm loving your angles on the characters, :D

I just finished rereading 1-11,very good improvments...I'mrealy enjoying the story can,t wit for the ne chapters....