rate_review Reviews

I was so happy to see new chapters for this story. I've very much enjoyed it so far and it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what happens with the next lords on harry's hit list. As for Astoria...really don't think she should be made a part of the Harem but if Daphne becomes a Peverell and Harry takes down lord greengrass, could you somehow have Daphne adopt her so she becomes a Peverell too?
Can't wait for more.

I'm just catching up, since I've missed several chapters. Liking it very much, beta'd or not, and I don't think there's anything wrong with your sex scenes, you're still finding your own style, so I wouldn't worry about it. May I suggest binding Astoria to Ron or one of his brothers? They would treat her well, and she would certainly find more fun with one of the twins or with Charlie, perhaps.

I wouldn't have Astoria added to the Harem, but given the protection of the House Black, kind of like a Ward of the State. Make Harry her Guardian. She's only fourteen or fifteen, and I think that might be a little too young to add to the Harem. This will give her the protection from her father, and still maintain her virtue.

Great chapter,

Daphne needs to join the Harem, but Astora should just come under the protection of the house of Potter.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Please don't kill tonks

im glad ur back.
ur the only one left thay writes harry fics that doesnt involve him being gay.
anyways great fic. i hope u start some news too.

it is a very good story and I would certainly volunteer to do proof reading if you would like.. I have written a few stories and they seem to get lots of hits--they are not fanfic but garden variety adult stories ranging from bdsm themes to all out orgy scens...let me know

SSJ,

I must comment you on one HELL of a story so far. I'm a fan of female submission and orgies and all the like. So far your writing is astounding and your imagination is so much fun! I love the Harry Potter characters. I read the books as a child and have had a connection to the series ever since. Please, please continue to do your very best to continue your work on these stories! I eagerly anticipate being able to continue reading them! I can't wait to see what you come up with in the future chapters! And, if I may, can I offer a suggestion for your next chapter should any of Harry's lovely ladies fall out of line? I always thought that the idea of having a woman walk around during the day with a big vibrator inside her would be a huge turn on. Maybe, with Harry's powers, you could have them wear them during the day and give him the ability to control when they're on and when they're off? Just a thought. It'd be a good way to get them incredibly horny for no good reason at all! ^_^

Keep up the good work, SSJ! I hope your muse gets a kick with this review!

-DX

I loved this story! Please update soon :D

It seems at your writing it, your getting better and better!

Question: Is ginny still being fucked by nevile as punishment, or because she likes it?

Anyway, again, I implore you, please update :D

With all due respect, I don't think that Hermione should be the 'alpha dog' that you are making it out to be. It should be a partnership between all the girls, not a wolf-pack type situation.... hell, even in wolf-packs, you are allowed to challenge the Alpha female!