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Keep up the fantastic work, SSJ! Your stories are great, although I do notice they've shortened in recent chapters. I'm sure you can find ways to keep them interesting at length. Perhaps you might consider increasing the interactivity of the Harem with the town? There's got to be more to it than just the pool and the streets. I know that small towns usually have community gatherings (dances, markets, concerts, etc.) and such on a weekly basis. Maybe Hermione could reconnect with an old muggle teacher and introduce Harry to him or her?

Also, I noticed your chapters of late have some spelling and grammar errors. If you'd like, I'd be happy to Beta for you and help you fix them up a bit. In return, maybe you could look over some of my work? I'm working on a Harem fic, myself. It's a little kinkier than yours, but a Harem fic just the same. Plenty of smut to keep the senses occupied, as well. Let me know. My email is svtdriver86(at)gmail(dot)com.

Thanks, and keep up the fantastic work!

Very well written :)
keep it up

<3 Keep them coming mate, big ups!

I can't wait to see how you do the Chief Wiz battle, :D

sorry again but the latest chapter was excelent

This story is really good I really liked reading it

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yah apparently my reviews went down as anon. anyways i think she sud have it easy. lord ? i cant spell his name. doesnt really know that miss longbottom s on harrys side. it cud be a nice suprise for the lord later in the story

Loving this so far and how fast you are updating, please keep up the good work!

I think the whole harem should return and I think its high time at least Hermione got pregnant

That was awesome. When's the next chapter coming out?