rate_review Reviews

Amazing story. Love it

The reason Su Li should be part, is I always thought they were more Royal, so could be part royal family of Japan as well as China with other family traits of "Demons": Neko and Kitsune!

When is the next one

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Seeing as it has been a couple of years since the last edit, I figure you have walked away from this particular tale. I just wanted to thank you for the story. It was one of very few that I have read that balanced a story of its own with a good bit of smut. There seem to be two extremes (1. Trying to write serious novel level stories that would be right at home with JKR, meaning no smut or language, or 2. Pure PWP with everyone being miles out of character.) In this, when you wrote a character out of character (Bella Lestrange/Black for example), you actually took the time to flesh out a explanation of why the changes.
Again, thank you for your work and time.

(Oh, and if you decide to tack some more on to this, I sure as hell wouldn't complain... :-) )

This is really well done, unfortunately it seems this story will never be completed. I went to the authors page to find out about updates and there is a message up saying the author has passed away

"You will be broken" doesn't translate to "Sie wird unterbrochen"!
The correct translation is either "Du wirst gebrochen sein." or "Sie wird gebrochen sein.", both of which isn't good stile ;)
In german one would sooner say "Ich werde Dich brechen!" ("I'll brake you!") or simply "Ich kriege Dich!" ("I'll get you!")

More please

I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue it. Lots of plots, twists, and finally a story without a lot of Weasly bashing.

I have just started this story and I like it I was wondering how do I save it so I can continue to read it?